Monday, 21 January 2013

Introduction

Welcome to my AS Media Foundation Portfolio. 
Here you will find all of my year 12 coursework. 

Sapna Solanki
Candidate Number: 8280
Centre Number: 16607

Thursday, 10 January 2013

Evaluation: Response to Audience Feedback

After reading my audience feedback, I tried to make some changes to my work according to the suggestions that were made which were thought to improve the magazine:

  • I added icons of social networking sites to the contents page and the double-page spread: 





  • I added the names of the interviewer and the photographer of the double-page spread article: 



  • It was suggested that it was difficult to tell the difference between when the interviewer was speaking and when the interviewee was speaking in the double-page spread article, so I changed the appearance of some of the text, by making the text of the questions in bold and the answers in italic: 



  • I also proof-read the whole magazine and made appropriate changes to correct the spelling and punctuation and make sure everything made sense. 



Monday, 7 January 2013

Evaluation: Audience Feedback

After looking at my final pages for my music magazine, I received some more feedback, including some improvements that I need to make:


  • Consider adding references to social networking sites, such as Facebook and Twitter
  • Add more information to the contents page
  • Consider how many pages the magazine will consist of in total, and create more headlines/articles that can be mentioned on the contents page. 
  • Add an interviewer and who took the photos on the double-page spread
  • Proof-read and edit the content of the double-page spread (there were a few spelling mistakes)